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RiKaN HaVoK
8th of February 2009 (Sun), 09:57
So, I was experimenting shooting people but I don't have a subj that want to pose so all I was really doing was taking snapshots. Got pretty aggravating, so I went to the docks to have some quiet time .. Came home with two pleasing shoots ...

C&C are more than welcome and encourage .. Tell me all the negatives so I can improve please .. thanks for looking, hope you all enjoyed!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3319/3261327339_9b19c6f493_o.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3514/3262027030_361769380d_o.jpg

RiKaN HaVoK
8th of February 2009 (Sun), 22:05
?? Not even a "damn those are horrible" or "WoW I love them"

or "I think it be better if ....."

C&C Section and not even a whisper .. :(

thegaa
8th of February 2009 (Sun), 22:56
I love the second one so much... its beautiful.

leitch
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 02:55
2nd is very nice, though the massive flare on the hull is quite distracting. #1 of the cockpit of the boat doesn't really do anything for me, sorry.

RiKaN HaVoK
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 07:36
thanks guy

the cockpit was more like a impulse snap .. I still like the way it came out ...

I was trying to remove those flares, but I'm not sure what too to use .. I tried healing brush or patch and it does not do a very good job in taking it out - or should I said I don't know how to do a good job. Can you assist leitch?

howaboutnow
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 15:24
Picture 2 is beautiful Rikan, but the flare needs to go. Wish I could help you with this, but I don't know how!!!

:)

Max Demian
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 15:41
#2 is amazing. The boat is a bit under exposed but that's something you have to live with if you don't want to tread into HDR territory or blowing out the sunset.

The flare in the hull is too big for my (very) limited knowledge of cloning/patching/healing/kneading/knitting, wish I could help though...

Robbierob
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 16:07
as stated above....#2 is a nice shot, butthe flare is distracting in this image

RiKaN HaVoK
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 16:23
Thank you all - I guess unless I step up my editing skills up I will have to live with the occasional flare .. :p

Once again thanks for the comments and criticism - I would of have thought the garbage can right under the sun would of have bother some as well ..