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akphotography07
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 14:51
Continued..... Let me know how I can improve or what I did wrong so I can correct them as I move along.

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3524/3265373707_94fa5950e8.jpg?v=0

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3370/3265370079_383603cb20.jpg?v=0

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3509/3266133672_a50c2d6ed9.jpg?v=0

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3419/3266062166_7482bfc920.jpg?v=0

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3316/3262654128_6eed19f94d.jpg?v=0

Thanks for viewing. Have a great day.

Cheers
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michillebaker
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 15:03
To be i see nothing you need to improve on.You need to show us some worst picture then these before you ask us that one :). lol just kidden, no but these are amazing! Great Work.
akphotography07
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 15:06
lol that's funny alright I will keep that in mind lol thanks
HQP
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 15:29
Excellent series. Well done!
MNance
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 15:41
Those are great! Love the colors!
g-money
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 17:45
Another great set Alex. She has a wonderful smile and you captured them both very well. I have to ask, what is the brownish/reddish plants they are knee deep in?
akphotography07
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 17:51
thanks g-money and yes those plants reddish colored are knee high it was fun.
henry_b
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 19:02
another great set! love the color on all of them! great PP.
form
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 23:37
My personal preference would be for about 90% of the shots to be less magenta/orange. I don't like the framing of #4 or the limited ability to really see their faces; the body positioning in that one is also not very dynamic for such a dynamic occasion (they form a straight line, not even a leg or an arm out of place).
PhotosbyBobbi
9th of February 2009 (Mon), 23:44
My personal preference would be for about 90% of the shots to be less magenta/orange. I don't like the framing of #4 or the limited ability to really see their faces; the body positioning in that one is also not very dynamic for such a dynamic occasion (they form a straight line, not even a leg or an arm out of place).

I agree...I can see an orangeish/magenta cast in most of them and a little bit of a yellow tint in some. My favorite is #3! Overall good job!
SoaringUSAEagle
10th of February 2009 (Tue), 17:51
These are a bit too saturated in the orange/red tones, I agree. Very nice poses and compositions, however.