PP Process

[chuckw]

Hello all:

I've been playing with some PP today on some quick shots of the kids (free models) I was wondering if this one works

[mpistone]

I think the dark circle is a bit too sharp, maybe if you feather it a bit more?

[RyanK]

Vignette is really heavy. Cross processing is alright.

[iN5P1R3]

I'm not sure whether you were trying to create a spotlight or vignette. If the latter is the case, add some feathering. I don't particularly like the cross-processing either.

Keep practicing with PP :)

[theGTIguy]

I agree with more feathering, though as posted above I don't know if you're going for vignette or a spotlight look. The colors inside the circle are also very flat imo, though you may have done this for effect.