Can i get some critique on these photos please?

[Salma]

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[exposurecontrol]

I like all of them except number 3. Just don't care for the pose on that one.

[Robert_Lay]

This many pictures is a bit much to ask people to critique.
You will probably do much better if you submit one or two and ask for critique.

When you are looking for comments specific to post processing, it will be to your advantage to submit in pairs - before and after. Otherwise the critic has no way to know what you have accomplished in PP.

Your pictures all look good.

[APointInTime]

I like 6, 7, and 8. 8 the most. Very nice!

[Salma]

This many pictures is a bit much to ask people to critique.
You will probably do much better if you submit one or two and ask for critique.

When you are looking for comments specific to post processing, it will be to your advantage to submit in pairs - before and after. Otherwise the critic has no way to know what you have accomplished in PP.

Your pictures all look good.
Thanks alot, i'll keep that in mind. These were posted for c&c on both the photography and editing.

[MrSiki99]

Great color and contrast, good for your first fashion shoot. Number 8 is a really great shot, very creative and interesting angle. Since you are using natural light and can't get any strobes or such, maybe try getting a reflector or two to help play around with the sunlight.

[guppiegale]

I like #8 but wish she would have been glancing more in the direction of the camera,

[ScottKCooper]

lovey model, colors, and fabrics. #2 doesn't work due to the hair parting away from her forehead, and the top of her head being cut off. Wind issue? #3 might have worked if she'd some henna work on her hands / fingers, combined with her left side of the veil being over her head (I'm trying to say only one hand holding it in front of her face, not two). # 6 or 7 - I'm just dying to see her looking towards the camera - her eyes seem as though they would really draw you in - none of them have that. Thanks for sharing!

[Bill Boehme]

A general comment -- all of the close-ups are profiles (i.e., we see only one eye and the person is looking to the side. I think that you should try some portraits where the person is facing more towards you -- maybe about 30 to 45 degrees from straight ahead.