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RobSollarsPhoto
8th of March 2009 (Sun), 19:09
Taken in the doorway of an abandoned house by a lake; all natural lighting, thoughts?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3327/3339030029_7430d99107.jpg?v=0
Robert_Lay
8th of March 2009 (Sun), 19:43
Much too contrasty.
Highlights are burned out in cheek and nose, left shoulder and foreground.

No detail in deep shadows (hair).

Note the bags under her eyes - it's things like that that you are supposed to catch when proofing the shots.