Overall Impressions....

[JohnEBongo]

I know there are too many pix to ask for critique of each one so I am looking for your overall impression of the pix as a whole. This is my first real paid shoot and is the package I am presenting to my client. ( The one with the baby(mine) and the tilted one won't be included). Again, overall impressions please and any specific comments appreciated.....Thanks

John

http://johnebongophotography.smugmug.com/gallery/214315

[PaCiFiSt]

I like them - very good

[johneric8]

good job!!

[rammy]

Well done, good pictures.

Question about the first and second one (dude with braces)... I presume that the second suit shot was done on a seperate day to the first? The lighting, in my opinion, looks more dramatic on the second one, than the first.

Did you have side lighting on the second one?
Maybe try side lighting (if that is what it is) on some of the others to give more of a depth to the pictures. Some of them do look a little flat, but much better than what I could come up with ;-)

[JohnEBongo]

Rammy, these all were taken on the same day. I used 3 lights(main, fill and hair) but I was changing things here and there, which probably explains the differences in the two shots you mentioned. Thanks for you thoughts on these!!

John