Please Critique My Photos :D

[Joshua14321]

Heey Guys :D

Took some test photos at the beach with my digi cam.

Haha they're pretty Newbish but atleast I tried :)

The Photos Are here:
http://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=653217

Please reply here to critique them :)

And tell me what you think, Thanks

Joshh ;)

[swjim]

I would tone down the saturation a bit but you're off to a good start. Keep shooting!

[Joshua14321]

Thanks :D

Haha Yeah the stupid screens at school make the image color look heaps weak :D

Thankss ;)

[DerekSimon]

I agree with swjim, definately reduce the saturation on all of them and you'll be okay.

[Joshua14321]

I uploaded the originals in the link I posted :D

Joshh ;)