My First Bridal Session... C&C Needed!

[mandercruso]

I had my first bridal shoot a couple of weeks ago. All shots were taken with my 5D and most with the Canon 85 f1.8.

Please let me know where I can improve. I will be doing another bridal session in a month and would like them to be even better then these.

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[toronto photographer]

Congrats!
Nice job!

[guntoter]

Wow........the bottom pic is a winner. What a beautiful place.
The gun picture looks a little blown out. No detail in the dress.
The one going up the steps is a good pose. I like the effect.
(all comments of a non-wedding photographer.....someday hopefully)

[esspee1200]

bottom pic is great. others are a lil noisy, but are nonetheless awesome!

[Ziffle]

Overall good stuff .... nice shots.
The last one is sweet-money. Love the 'gun' shot.. no pun intended.
I like #1 and #2. Good composition on #2.
#3 - to much in background for me.
#4 - depends on what you wanted to convey. Nice pose but dress is blown as mentioned previously.
#5 does nothing for me ... its okay.
#6 is classic .... very nice.

Nice compositions/pp ..... just my 2 cents.
Later,
_Mark

[FamilyJules]

LOVE the bottom shot! Wow! So dreamy and ethereal! That's one for the port!
Heck, I'd blow that one up and use it for bridal shows

[mandercruso]

thx everyone for the comments! I'm glad to see everyone likes the last shot. It's quite a beautiful place! I will definitely work more on composition (especially backgrounds) and focus more on not blowing out the dress on editing. It tends to look fine on my macbook pro glossy screen, and a little more blown highlights on my Dell LCD.

[collierportraits]

Neat shots and I, too like the last one. Question your overuse of the "do not print", though. Seems a bit over protective to me. A copyright symbol is more professional and says the same thing to somewhere that prints these professionally. Can't keep the home printers from firing up regardless... Just my .03 ;)

[Nicole Faith]

Oh my word, what a stunning location.

I love the one where she is sitting in the field of daffodils. But that last one is just amazing. Looks like a puzzle my dad would put together and then hang on the wall. (not in a bad way - all those amazing landscape painting are made into puzzles!) :)