A & E

[Sylvester XxX]

C & C Welcome


1.
http://www.takethispicture.com/forums/IMG_8362.jpg


2.
http://www.takethispicture.com/forums/IMG_8422.jpg


3.
http://www.takethispicture.com/forums/IMG_8370-Edit.jpg


4.
http://www.takethispicture.com/forums/IMG_8539.jpg


5.
http://www.takethispicture.com/forums/IMG_8682-Edit.jpg

[PeaceFire]

1. I like.

2. Maybe bring out the colors in the flowers a little bit more. And the cropping is weird. I feel like my attention should be on the bouquet, but it cuts off at the bottom.

3. Love the angle and the shot, but maybe up the contrast between her and the background. Her left arm almost disappears into the background.

4. Cute moment, but you're too tight. I want to know what her torso is doing. Do you have any wider angles? And WHAT is on that woman's head!?!?!

5. Again, I like it but you're losing your bride to your background. And, again, I want to see the rest of the picture. If you have a full body shot of the two of them dancing, completely ignore this comment. I love the look on the groom's face and you captured the feeling of the moment.

[Sylvester XxX]

1. I like.

2. Maybe bring out the colors in the flowers a little bit more. And the cropping is weird. I feel like my attention should be on the bouquet, but it cuts off at the bottom.

3. Love the angle and the shot, but maybe up the contrast between her and the background. Her left arm almost disappears into the background.

4. Cute moment, but you're too tight. I want to know what her torso is doing. Do you have any wider angles? And WHAT is on that woman's head!?!?!

5. Again, I like it but you're losing your bride to your background. And, again, I want to see the rest of the picture. If you have a full body shot of the two of them dancing, completely ignore this comment. I love the look on the groom's face and you captured the feeling of the moment.


Tanks

Re-edit.

2. I agree I will cut my losses on that.

4. I have a touch more space and pulling back is better I think. I remember liking that hat! :)

http://www.takethispicture.com/forums/IMG_8539-3.jpg

3.

http://www.takethispicture.com/forums/IMG_8370-Edit-2-2.jpg

5.

http://www.takethispicture.com/forums/IMG_8682-Edit-2-Edit2.jpg

[PeaceFire]

Much better. Haha, I do love that hat. And my eyes actually didn't go to it right away (what a glowing bride!) but after I looked at the bride I was like waaht? My first thought was- must be in England. :) Is that a stereotype? I'm horrible.

[Sylvester XxX]

:) You are correct. It was England lol.

[tommyqh]

4. And WHAT is on that woman's head!?!?!



hahahah this is funny, i have to agree too when i first looked at it.

[Michael Bottoms]

Good offering, but still find three too dark...

[Sylvester XxX]

Good offering, but still find three too dark...

I think there is scope to pull a bit more detail into her face but I would lose detail in her dress. I guess a way around would be to combine multiple exposures I will give that a go...

[Michael Bottoms]

I think there is scope to pull a bit more detail into her face but I would lose detail in her dress. I guess a way around would be to combine multiple exposures I will give that a go...

If you succeed ( or even if you don't), I'd like to see your results... Good luck

[PeaceFire]

Maybe lighten up the background on #3 but leave her as-is. That may help brighten it up a bit...