Some Roadcourse pics

[bizkit642]

C&C much appreciated.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3432/3406224900_9234ef1df8_b.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3599/3405413783_25ef839d86_b.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3566/3406211384_e181c15711_b.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3468/3406220914_68ee16fc59_b.jpg

[bizkit642]

Be harsh, be cruel whatever, I'm really out to do the best I can.

Thanks guys

[aram535]

ok so some minor points:
- Your main subject is too central. Move it off to the side.
- You're leaving too much dead space in the photo, crop tighter. (Obviously you want to leave space for the subject to move into the photo so don't go crazy with it).
- Need a little more contrast in the photos, they are very flat at the moment.
- The SS was excellent in 1st, ok in 2nd, and too slow in 3rd photos (although if it was just the front car it would have been good, the fuzzed out red car ruined it)

[DerekSimon]

I agree with Aram, all of the shots are too centered for my taste.

[bizkit642]

So basically keep the rules of thirds in mind, and crop tighter?

Thanks guys.