I don't boleve it, another SITE REVIEW!!

[jhkphoto]

hey all you POTN's... i have posted my web-site on here befor and got a lot of realy helpfull feed back
(thanks everyone that helped me with that)
i have done a hole tun of changing sense then.....

is there anything you-all see that you might change if it was your site? any photographs that you think are particularly week in the galleries?

Like always, thanks for your help !:D

www.johnkepcharphotography.squarespace.com

[DerekSimon]

Seemingly the actual page loads are slow and I have a 18m down connection

The title bar with "Home| Galleries...." needs to be correctly positioned because it is hanging onto a second line which doesn't look professional

" I charge thirtyfive dollars an hour, fees may very based on location and type of shoot." - lose that line completely, not professional at all.

I think that the section where users order photo's is too wordy. All of the technical info that is useful to people like us, can confuse a customer away.

Your contact page is slightly skecthy, meaning you should have a business address and contact number. You can obtain at free voicemailed number at www.k7.net <---- not an advertisement just in case this is perceived the wrong way.

I did not see the original site but I would definately say this one needs some editing before becoming an actual customer viewed site. Sorry if this was somewhat harsh but, I have viewed better sites in the past. If you would need any help with editing or anything of that nature I would be willing to help in my spare time. Just let me know.

[Jim M]

Looks nice. You should have someone else review it for typos, punctuation errors, and grammar issues. I saw some in my quick look. It is almost impossible to review for those things yourself unless you put some time between creation and review. Even then, other people will see things you miss and, of course, we tend to make the same mistakes over and over. At work, I try to have three or four people review the stuff I write for public display.

[Jonta]

1: Far too long URL
2: Sidescroll on 1024*768 with taskbar on side of screen
3: The writing on the intropicture. No. Doesn't work. Font, colour, placement. No.
4: You don't need a copyrightnotice. (http://www.templetons.com/brad/copymyths.html)
5: Title doesn't seem to be any good on any of the pages.
6: Why can't I click on picture #6 when I'm on #1? Should be able too. Have enough space.

[DerekSimon]

Well I am glad to see that I wasn't the only person to rain on the parade.