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rsagusti
5th of April 2009 (Sun), 06:40
Here's my session from yesterday, please cc comps, colors, pping, basically everything!

All taken with my 24-70L at f/2.8, indoor ISOs 400, outdoor ISO 100.

1.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3549/3413476788_5b639b5f84.jpg?v=0

2.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3618/3413477696_5abf04edb6.jpg?v=0

3.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3627/3413482160_f2849eb99e.jpg?v=0

4.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3314/3412674297_21f9f48723.jpg?v=0

5
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3390/3413475708_fb7999c3fa.jpg?v=0

6.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3641/3413475904_3039423c80.jpg?v=0

7.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3315/3412669213_faf77e1ca6.jpg?v=0

rsagusti
5th of April 2009 (Sun), 13:48
nothing??

Friendly bump?

tonydee
5th of April 2009 (Sun), 14:08
It's a good set, nice conception, composition and execution. #5 had some difficult-to-deal-with lighting - you've done pretty well but she still looks a bit pasted on, and the background just slightly washed out. The boys face in #2 might benefit from a touch of curves adjustment... put a little more contrast through it. #6 is a slightly confronting crop, but fair enough under the circumstances - looks more harmonious the way you tackled it in #4 though. #7 a smidge bright for my taste... would bring the ground in the centre down a bit. Cheers, Tony

xn2b8r
5th of April 2009 (Sun), 14:33
#2 is very nice; sorry I don't agree on the curves adjustment. In the shots with the mom's face visible, she seems to be a little too aware of the camera.

CJinAustin
5th of April 2009 (Sun), 18:33
#4 is nice but I would clone out those dark spots... looks like the kid is smoking a cigar out her belly button.

-Douglas-
5th of April 2009 (Sun), 18:59
1. Would of been nice to catch her off guard, checking herself out in the reflection of the door.
2. maybe better in portrait but goes with the set.
3. nice idea
4. nice idea
5. just a snap with no shadow , looks like she is floating
6. goes with the set, maybe portrait better?
7. nice idea

:)