Forgotten

[flyfishing4life]

Here's a shot I took while working on a project at school. We were supposed to capture a sense of being alone and abandoned. This was taken in an abandonded elementary school. Tell me what you think. All C&C welcome.

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n96/flyfishing4life/Picture006-2.jpg

[The Ghost of FM]

It's not bad but it doesn't tell a complete story in terms of composition.

The standard, I believe, is to give the subject some space and detail about its surroundings to more clearly show where it is and why it is abandoned...if that makes any sense? You told us it was taken in an elementary school but the picture doesn't tell us that on its own. The lighting and exposure were very nicely done!

Hope that helps.

Cheers!