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rachelle14
6th of April 2009 (Mon), 15:08
Comments and feedback are welcome!!!!
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http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk138/RachelleE14/a02-2.jpg
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http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk138/RachelleE14/a10.jpg
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http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk138/RachelleE14/a06-3.jpg
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http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk138/RachelleE14/a11.jpg
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SoaringUSAEagle
6th of April 2009 (Mon), 17:04
Wow, no comments yet??? I am surprised!

1. I think you could have been a tiny bit closer (if possible, I know how this can go) and the use of a circular polarizer would have helped.

2-5 - Simply awesome! Nice exposures and compositions.

6. Hmmm, I feel a square crop with this photo. The way the railing wraps near her head creates a lot of eye tension. And with the tree in the background as well, it really makes the image feel cramped. Try a square crop... Or clone out the trees on the left and right, but leave the railing. Beautiful image nonetheless.

7. Perfect merchandise shot... Hehe. Yep, it's real! :D

8. Nice silhouette. Being picky here again - a vertical shot would have worked better here. I don't see a need in showing the posts and trees in the bg.

Nice series. Looks like a fun wedding!

SoaringUSAEagle
6th of April 2009 (Mon), 17:12
As you have image editing okayed, here are my quick edits.

SoaringUSAEagle
6th of April 2009 (Mon), 17:12
And the square cropping...

FamilyJules
6th of April 2009 (Mon), 17:24
nice edits, Soaring... great call on the vertical crop for the silhouette shot

TristanCardew
7th of April 2009 (Tue), 03:43
#5 is gorgeous. Makes me smile.

gravcy
7th of April 2009 (Tue), 12:34
I love #5 as well. Those "panel" set ups really tell the story.

rachelle14
7th of April 2009 (Tue), 14:13
Thanks!!!! I really like the vertical edit on the silhouette shot as well - NICE CALL!

USER876
7th of April 2009 (Tue), 14:40
Very nice, are these lightroom or PS PP?

Eliza_Day
7th of April 2009 (Tue), 16:05
these are very very nice!

ejicon
7th of April 2009 (Tue), 22:25
I like the contrast in all of them

rachelle14
10th of April 2009 (Fri), 16:11
Thank you!!! USER876 - I used both lightroom and PS for processing

JimAskew
13th of April 2009 (Mon), 10:43
These are very well done. You have captured the emotion of the day superbly. #4, #, and #6 are just super. I also like the way Jeff cropped the silhouette shot :)

joshbehan
15th of April 2009 (Wed), 12:28
nice work Rachelle. aside from what others have said, these images don't quite show enough Kauai IMO. I'd like to see some dramatic Napali coast type mountains, and lush hawaiian greenery.

rachelle14
15th of April 2009 (Wed), 12:39
joshbehan: They were locals and so they choose the locations that they wanted - if if were up to me i would have went to another beach that had more greenery and mountains as well :)