Horse Show #2...please C/C

[1shot4u]

1.

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/4629/horseshow160.jpg

2.

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/1672/horseshow194.jpg

[CanadianKitKat]

Good timing on the jump, that's just where you want the front legs traditionally, but needs to be cropped down to about a 1/4 of what it is now. I like the second one as well, but I'd still crop it a fair bit tighter to cut out the horse on the left.

[1shot4u]

KitKat thanks again. Hey if you want..check out the rest of the Horse show @ http://stephenshell.photoshop.com and see what you think. Keep in touch.

[alexanderGARDNER]

Tough shows to shoot I'll admit! Until you get the flow of it all EVERYTHING is happening but luckily they are repetitive. Midday sun blows though.

Like what's been said, I would crop #1 or given the chance moved to just down the row from where that car is parked and shot from low to get shot.

#2 I would have tightened up on the rider and horse to make it more intimate.