glam shot topless

[GyRob]

took this with the 17/40 on my 20d set at 30mm just built in flash i wanted the harsher light . iso 200 1.250 /f8
quite a bit of photoshop and used noiseware to give it that magazine look . so does this shot work ? or any tips from the pro,s .thanks
Rob.

[goldstrikn]

Nice bike

[GyRob]

theres always one !

[monkey_wrench]

wow thats hot!!!

[jukas]

Well you did post this in the critique section, so here goes:

Her skirt, boots and underwear seem overexposed. Your eye always goes to the lightest part of the image, so I found myself staring at her boots, skirt and underwear. Not a bad way to spend the day I guess, but that's not what I want to be doing in this picture.

Interesting concept of her on the bike, but for me it doesn't work with the background. I would much prefered a natural outdoor setting, or even a solid color background.

I wouldn't mind her skin being overexposed, but that glaring screaming white of her clothing just pulls my attention away and just doesn't work well for me.

[cactusclay]

I have to agree with the skirt and boots being washed out, but the background doesn't bother me. I think it's a very nice composition.

[smittymike19]

Well you did post this in the critique section, so here goes:

Her skirt, boots and underwear seem overexposed. Your eye always goes to the lightest part of the image, so I found myself staring at her boots, skirt and underwear. Not a bad way to spend the day I guess, but that's not what I want to be doing in this picture.

Interesting concept of her on the bike, but for me it doesn't work with the background. I would much prefered a natural outdoor setting, or even a solid color background.

I wouldn't mind her skin being overexposed, but that glaring screaming white of her clothing just pulls my attention away and just doesn't work well for me.

this chicks is hot and the picture is fine as it stands. i for one enjoy have my eye travel towards her underwear...i think he planned it that way...lol

[cjm]

looks like porn ;) but good shot!

[L Pagan]

bike what bike. just kidding nice pic

[GyRob]

thanks for comments , (The porn i keep ) and i see what you mean about the dress and panties my eye too keeps going to the white now its been pointed out, i have to agree it pulls your eye's far to much ;)have to try it without the clothes.
Rob.

[imposter]

very nice shot...
im very new to photography and i might be totally wrong... since its in the critique corner...
thought the background is very abstract and very nice, it does not make the bike stand out too. what i mean is the background is kinda dark and the bike being black... kinda blends with the background. like someone suggested, outdoors would be great like on a grassy park or something. just my opinion.

[BEEEsH]

To be honest,

The whites are WAY to high. The girl is beautiful (whatever) so you wanna give her a little priority. When looking at this pic, my eyes automatically get drawn to anything that is white (her skirt/underwear/socks) It kinda takes away from the girl/bike depending on what your subject actually is. :-P

Overall though, the composition is nice, maybe change the background? (not a big issue because your look at other places :lol:)

8/10

[pradeep1]

Very dirrty. ;) Too much contrast in the picture. Focus a little too sharp. Lost details in the skin tones. Her going spread eagle is not that appealing. Maybe legs more together. Her bone structure and skinny base does not lend much interest to that area of her body. Would include more of the bike, or cut more of it out all together. Background not fitting with mood of shot.

[CappuccinoDavid]

Yes the white are too much, and try a different background. But you getting their...