my easter attempt

[SUB1IM388]

So i tried to get some Easter pictures to send to the family today but nothing really worked for me these are my favorites but im still dont love them. Guess it wasnt my day today ill try again tomorrow :confused:

http://i380.photobucket.com/albums/oo243/SUB1IM388/Easterpictures-27of73.jpg

http://i380.photobucket.com/albums/oo243/SUB1IM388/Easterpictures-31of73.jpg

http://i380.photobucket.com/albums/oo243/SUB1IM388/Easterpictures-32of73.jpg

http://i380.photobucket.com/albums/oo243/SUB1IM388/Easterpictures-33of73.jpg

http://i380.photobucket.com/albums/oo243/SUB1IM388/Easterpictures-34of73.jpg

These were shot with my tamron 28-75mm at 40-48 mm stoped down to 5.6 tomorrow im going to try F 8 or 10

well tell me what you think and give me input on what i can do better tomorrow please..

[Kauaicrazed]

These are all very soft. Did you sharpen them at all?

I'm not diggin any of the pping of them too much. I think #1 looks the best if it were cropped differently...too much white space above her head. The b/g in most of them has that wood bar that is really distracting...I would keep that in mind when selecting a place to do the shoot. I would also suggest using real flowers if you are gonna use flowers in your shoot.

Hope I wasn't too harsh just giving you input to try and help.

[SUB1IM388]

not harsh at all i appricciate it the wood board is the floor board i didnt expect to shoot from that angle but thats the only side i could get a good angle there soft cause there out of focus hens the reason for the pp i used (user error not my glass) thanks for the input again

[Svetlana]

I agree with the above comments. I like to experiment with different pp sometimes but here I'm not sure why you went for those tints. How about this:

[SUB1IM388]

Ha i have one with that affect as well good job thanks

[Phil.hearing]

i dont think the last edit above really works...