My 1st Wedding shot, any thoughts ?

[anorphirith]

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[tim]

First series is cool, the rest are nice standard shots, great for a first wedding :)

btw you should post in the photo sharing forum, not the discussion forum.

[SUB1IM388]

man thats alot of RANK!!! great shots +1 one the photo sharring

[bps]

Very nice job!

[timnosenzo]

Looks like you did a nice job! I'd say a couple things to watch in the formal picture is that first, not everyone is looking at you, second, the guys are all doing different things with their hands, and third, the girls could lower their flowers a bit--they seem a little nervous. :)

Really nice job though! I love the 1st sequence, cool idea.

[PeaceFire]

Pretty good!

Going with what PP said I always shout out some basic instructions during portraits for the bridal party- Men: Right hand over left, Women: Flowers (or whatever they carry down) held near their right hip. It looks more formal that way. Though in this case it looks like the girls are all trying to cover up their cleavages and weren't too comfortable about the attire. I could be wrong, though.

[anorphirith]

thanks for the comments
are the family pictures really that important !? I hate taking these shots, nothing much creative in them

[sarahsphotography]

great shots!