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jeromego
14th of April 2009 (Tue), 21:11
Here's my share of e session. Comments and suggestions as always are greatly appreciated.

1.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3307/3443507508_5220f3bdc1_b.jpg

2.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3413/3442681893_928df3df15_b.jpg

3.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3190/3443497938_ed343119e5_b.jpg
jeromego
14th of April 2009 (Tue), 22:45
anyone?
Sittingshooter
14th of April 2009 (Tue), 23:02
Hey Jerome. Not bad, but like most all photos on this site ( especially mine) there could be improvements.
1) I like the idea but I feel it would have benefited alot if you had her face also. His eyes closed are kind of bothersom to me for some reason. Maybe next time move over to the right a little more so you can get both faces.
2) This shot is nice, however maybe you could clone out some of the distractions ( sign,car etc.) Nice idea..
3) Not bad, more personal liking on my part, I would rather see them looking more toward the camera. Also, his shirt looks kind of blown out on my monitor.
Didnt I just see these over on Flickr ?....Take it easy ..Brad
jeromego
14th of April 2009 (Tue), 23:04
noted. thanks brad. yea, i just posted them on flickr.
Sittingshooter
14th of April 2009 (Tue), 23:08
Jerome, I just checked out your website. You have some beautiful photos on there......Brad
jeromego
14th of April 2009 (Tue), 23:12
Jerome, I just checked out your website. You have some beautiful photos on there......Brad
thanks. still have a lot to learn.
Bkolowski111
15th of April 2009 (Wed), 14:41
#2 is hilarious
snyderman
15th of April 2009 (Wed), 14:55
Nice rich color. Maybe a tad on the 'warm' side. #3 has their faces pretty orangey-red. But I tend to go the OTHER way and desaturate a bit to give a more natural look.

Other than that, like the poses, like the sharpness and the color depth.

dave
jeromego
15th of April 2009 (Wed), 15:07
thanks.
Nicole Faith
17th of April 2009 (Fri), 00:12
The first one doesn't really show any emotion - or face for that matter - a lot of hair and shirt. I would nix that one.
jeromego
17th of April 2009 (Fri), 00:37
The first one doesn't really show any emotion - or face for that matter - a lot of hair and shirt. I would nix that one.
thanks nicole. thats what i thought too.
Zoso23
17th of April 2009 (Fri), 02:28
The first one doesn't really show any emotion - or face for that matter - a lot of hair and shirt. I would nix that one.

im gonna have to agree, not the best angle to capture this.

but the others are nice, good job.