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prlswabbie
20th of April 2009 (Mon), 17:36
Still learning, so please be completely honest.

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b311/prlswabbie/IMG_1423.jpg

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b311/prlswabbie/IMG_1318.jpg


Thanks,
Scott

brennasg
20th of April 2009 (Mon), 17:47
Im not really diggin these:( I do love the Tn Flag you are representing!

SOK
20th of April 2009 (Mon), 22:00
Hi,

I like the concept of the 2nd one better than the first.

Couple of things;

I can see something that looks a lot like bird dropping on the headstone on #1. It's a massive distraction. I'm not sure on the legalities/appropriateness of cleaning up headstones for a photo op, but it's something to consider in the future if you're back there sometime.

I think both would benefit from sunlight on the front of the headstones (rather that behind right in #1 and LHS in #2). This is obviously something you can change only by re-visting at a different time of day.

As a personal preference, I would have possibly got lower and closer to the subject headstone in #1, and narrowed the DOF a bit. The angle is kind of "snapshot-like"....which isn't necessarily bad, but something I'd try to avoid.

Again...I like #2 better than #1. I think a re-shoot at a different time of day to front-light the headstones (and possible a slightly tighter framing) would really turn out well.