View Full Version : As She turns to you.....
chunli
22nd of April 2009 (Wed), 12:45
http://www.photomalaysia.com/photography/data/1456/UY-32.jpg
SAB_Click
22nd of April 2009 (Wed), 13:05
I think you are just showing off now! :rolleyes:
Sisyphus
22nd of April 2009 (Wed), 13:23
The photo is very, very nice. Her pendant is a little distracting -- not sure whether you'd want to clone it out completely, and if that would make the shot less interesting. Either way, it's a great capture!
tonydee
22nd of April 2009 (Wed), 13:45
I'm not sure about the legitimacy of chopping her off mid-breast, but a terrific result all up. Much more interest than the average hair whipping thing... guess you could consult on the next Charlie's Angels.... Only other quip is that she looks a bit pasted on... just such an extreme shift from foreground to background. Cheers, Tony
chunli
23rd of April 2009 (Thu), 10:20
Thank you all again for the replies.
vpnd
23rd of April 2009 (Thu), 11:09
I'll give you my "pro" critique because I think you are getting pretty good with this one. The lighting is a little flat. It loses depth because the reflector used is a little close. reflectors are used to keep the highlights and shadows only at a 2:1 or 4:1 ratio. this is almost a 1:1. She could also be warmed up a bit. I agree (again with Tony D) the cropping can get a little distracting by cutting the bust in half. all or none please. Now please remember that this was posted in the critique area and I like the image. I usually only comment on images I like.
chunli
23rd of April 2009 (Thu), 20:20
hi vpnd
Thank you and the rest for taking time to share your point of views with me on the matter. I really appreciate it..... as I am able to see how the the viewers read my capture.
Cheers
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