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kinu
28th of April 2009 (Tue), 12:47
Shoot this in a fashion show.. C&C welcome http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd295/scare_crow_album_2/FP8828.jpg
DerekSimon
28th of April 2009 (Tue), 13:59
I like it, it's simple and has nice lighting. My only complaint would be her left hand would be less distracting if it was flat with her body.
tonydee
28th of April 2009 (Tue), 15:09
Looks like a librarian you wouldn't want to mess with. I like the left hand, but I've just finished watching Starship Troupers 1 & 2 back to back, and alien appendages emerging from stomachs seems the order of the day... seriously, it is kind of interesting there. Good placement on the right to heighten tension, nice lighting throughout, wish a little more hair was visible, and there was a touch more shadow detail in the hair and front of the dress at waist height... I find myself wanting more detail in the latter area to resolve the bulge under her left fingers and the grey ribbon, but it's not available. Very cool, moody, elegant work. Cheers, Tony
Robert_Lay
28th of April 2009 (Tue), 23:38
Why is she leaving the frame? Everyone knows that you are supposed to capture people coming into the frame - not leaving!
kinu
29th of April 2009 (Wed), 04:45
Intresting comment ,tonydee.. thanks for the feedback:D
kinu
29th of April 2009 (Wed), 04:47
Why is she leaving the frame? Everyone knows that you are supposed to capture people coming into the frame - not leaving!
Hi Robert Lay.. .. i try to get a nice composition out of it.. to bad too many photographer blocking the view:lol:
Robert_Lay
29th of April 2009 (Wed), 11:02
I can certainly believe that!
Grimlock
29th of April 2009 (Wed), 18:27
Why is she leaving the frame? Everyone knows that you are supposed to capture people coming into the frame - not leaving!

How do you know that she isn't moonwalking her way into the frame?

Lighting and posture seem great to me.