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chrisu002
19th of April 2005 (Tue), 12:34
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v129/chrisu002/IMG_3080d.jpg

verT
19th of April 2005 (Tue), 12:52
I like the composition, to me it looks nicely balanced with the rusty nails. The DOF IMO needs to be greater, I'm not sure if you did that on purpose or not but it kind of bugs me.

chrisu002
19th of April 2005 (Tue), 13:02
i didn't put the dof higher because it was totaly bllurring the nails and i wanted to stay sort of in focus to bring atterntion to them

rammy
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 05:30
I like it, very nice shot. Especailly the interest drawing you away from the flower (the nails that is).

One thing though, do you think the shadow of the plant is slightly distracting? I think a "cleaner" backdrop for the plant might be better?

4nR
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 07:24
where's the flower coming from? i'd love to see more of the bottom. if the flower is coming up through the boards and you showed that part it could make a more powerful picture. also, i'd like to see what it would look like if you brought some of the nails more into focus.