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bvi steve
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 15:43
I shot this newyears eve. What do you think?
DREB kit lens
thanx
bvi steve

khtwo
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 17:51
Good picture, very impressive.

rent
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 18:06
may i suggest cropping out the foreground? i think turning it into a landscape format with the birds as the foreground tightens the subject matter. what do you think?

-alex

O/confusion
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 19:41
Nice work. I think it looks pretty good cropped to more of a square format, too--cropping out just enough of the foreground to leave in the dark reflection of the cloud on the right.

regards,
Terry

serissolutions
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 20:20
Wow! Youre a rookie? Nice work. I agree crop out the forground...

OceanRider
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 20:29
I like it! Great job

Maureen Souza
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 20:33
Like this...... Nice picture!!!!

cactusclay
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 21:16
I like the foreground, it leads the viewer in.

exposingmyself
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 21:51
i like the cropping.

CappuccinoDavid
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 22:09
Both ways looks fine, tell use more about it?

serissolutions
20th of April 2005 (Wed), 22:13
I like the cropped version

rssfhs
21st of April 2005 (Thu), 05:28
I like the cropped version
me too.

bvi steve
21st of April 2005 (Thu), 16:26
I did it in both crops origanally, but when I printed it in 13 by 19 I didn't like the horizon in the center of the frame. Rule of thirds and all. I guess I should have made it a poll question. Thank you all for the input.

thanx
bvi steve

Croasdail
21st of April 2005 (Thu), 16:29
personaly I think splitting the difference would work. The reflection is cool.