Some C&C please

[Telemudcat]

I really like the way this shot came out; or, at least, it came out exactly how I had it in my head when I took. Thoughts, comments, feelings?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3657/3499627758_b2fc1a4e37_b.jpg

[tonydee]

Nice mood to the shot. Sign looks a bit too new, but style and wording's great. Maybe a bit of "porcelian" (sic) or something at front right would drive the point home, and give more sense of fore/mid/background. With everything very side on, and the barely visible past the near side of the car, I think that's quite important. Probably be the only thing driving home too. Alternatively, two steps left and some of the front of the car.... Cheers, Tony