cropping question

[castor]

I liked the composition through the lens, but I dont know if it works now. Input?

http://www.invent-design.com/totcrop.jpg

[Michaelmjc]

It's an odd picture, looks like shes eating a orange beside the wild watermellons at the zoo. I'm not really sure if I like it, it just seems really odd.

[castor]

Its my niece eating an orange at my parents home. Those are barrel cactus in the background.

[exposingmyself]

looks like shes eating a orange beside the wild watermellons at the zoo
phew, you scared me there for a minute!

she's a cutey. the picture is about her so it doesn't matter where she is. it works for me. next time try holding the camera in portrait.

i had an orange for breakfast this morning toooooooo.

[Rigby470]

Castor,

I think it's great! She's a cutie, and the brilliant orange color against the pastel colors and light skin tones, combined with the dark hair really stands out. What configuration did you use? (Lense, setting, camera, etc.)

[Dante King]

it works for me. I like all that is going on here.

[Sam]

I like the way you set this up. Only advice I could offer is wait until she pulls the orange away from her face. I have dozens of pictures of my daughter with things in front of her face that I thought would be cute when I pressed the shutter release.

and...
looks like shes eating a orange beside the wild watermellons at the zoo

made me fall out of my chair laughing :lol: