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theshape
18th of May 2009 (Mon), 05:51
One of the shots I took over the weekend.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2348/3538497253_c158584c6b_b.jpg

chrisu002
18th of May 2009 (Mon), 06:13
your title says "Pearls by the window " so i was expecting to see some pearls but they are blurred out, as for the picture the composition is good but the DOF should be wider.

theshape
18th of May 2009 (Mon), 06:19
I didn't know what else to call it. I don't really do titles and I didn't think "Lips by the window" was suitable.

Grimlock
18th of May 2009 (Mon), 16:46
DOF is way too narrow. We need to see more of her face in focus, IMO. I assume it was dark wherever this was taken. But, you could always balanced the exposure with the aperature to make up for any loss of light. Your exposure was set at 1/800. You could of brought that much lower and been good to go.

As Chris stated, the composition is good. And the her look is amazing.

DerekSimon
18th of May 2009 (Mon), 18:14
A wider DOF would make this a really cool shot.

liannallama
18th of May 2009 (Mon), 18:31
I like the lighting on most of her face except the shadow her nose makes on the left. I wish her whole face was in focus; not just her eye and hair. She is very pretty and I like the blurring of the pearls and hand.

gking
18th of May 2009 (Mon), 18:59
I agree about the DOF, a little wider DOF would improve it. Nice angle.

theshape
18th of May 2009 (Mon), 20:15
Sounds like a re-shoot is in order. Which is fine, because she is married to me. Thanks for the input.

MattMoore
18th of May 2009 (Mon), 20:22
Color is a bit off to me, try B&W