First Attempt at a RAW conversion...

[symes]

Alright folks I have to say I am impressed with the creative control RAW allows. Though I have a lot to learn could you please critique the following conversion?

Thanks...

[tim]

Not a bad conversion, perhaps a little dark though. I'd even risk blowing some highs to get more shadow detail. As for composition, it's a bit busy for my tastes, and it has no main subject.

[symes]

Not a bad conversion, perhaps a little dark though. I'd even risk blowing some highs to get more shadow detail. As for composition, it's a bit busy for my tastes, and it has no main subject.

I was wondering if it might be too dark...

on no main subject I have to say this is where a picture really loses its luster downsizing it. The subjet is suppose to be the Graveyard...the UN Cemetary for soldiers who passed away in combat during the war...The white gates, the entrance, are in the lower left corner.

Thanks for your thoughts...

Cheers...