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chittybb300
19th of May 2009 (Tue), 22:40
So....here goes....first post.....been lurking for a while :) but learnt so much...thanks to all.

Anyway, I never figured my first would be of flowers...

Out in the yard the other day, just before the sun went down....testing the recently cleaned/calibrated 70-200 2.8, dropped to a knee and snapped away....sat down that night to look at the results and for some reason really liked this one....the title just felt right.

Cropped and sharpened only (don't know how to do too much else :)).

Figured I would throw it into 'critique' to start...brave or foolish?

gcflora
19th of May 2009 (Tue), 22:47
Link to picture? :)

Edit: Hmm, there it is, wonder why it didn't show up at first...

swjim
20th of May 2009 (Wed), 00:45
I like it. Nicely done.

joedlh
20th of May 2009 (Wed), 10:12
Given the theme, I think it would work better as a vertical composition with the two out of focus flowers on the side cropped out. Then sell it to Hallmark.

bpiper7
20th of May 2009 (Wed), 13:48
Very nice. I agree about Hallmark but think the OOF flowers in the background give it context.

Flo
20th of May 2009 (Wed), 13:49
Just get that little bit of bud out at the bottom center.frame.

chittybb300
22nd of May 2009 (Fri), 08:52
Thanks for the observations/comments....have a great memorial day weekend.....:)