1st Baseball poster

[ecojoe]

I'm looking for some critiques on the first baseball poster I've ever done.

http://www.joes-photography.com/photos/520967063_sdr3N-L.jpg

[tmalone893]

Not bad at all. Here is my .02 on it.

1. Seems to be too much green. Maybe have the background a green and white gradient.

2. The lettering needs some DOF. I would emboss the letters and add a stroke outline to them. I see that the name and the number have a stroke outline but I would still raise the off the background a little.

3. I can't tell but if you haven't added a drop shadow to the letters, I would do that also.

[Easytarget]

Hey all,

haven't posted in here before, thought this was as good a time as any.

Well ecojoe, I took the liberty to play with your collage a bit, obviously the film strip would have been made up of various other shots that you had taken.

Cheers hope you like.

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[ecojoe]

Thanks for the feedback, Easytarget I sent you a PM.

[packpe89]

I like them both. I would feather the background images into each other a little more and rasie the primary shot to cover where the two images merge above his head.

Good work, gets me thinking.