First Paid Wedding

[royboy79]

Well I did my first paid wedding. I've done a family members wedding, but nothing where it didn't involve them. C&C welcomed please.
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http://rhphotography.typepad.com/.a/6a010534ad9d81970b01156fae150d970c-pi

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http://rhphotography.typepad.com/.a/6a010534ad9d81970b01156fae1dc6970c-pi

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http://rhphotography.typepad.com/.a/6a010534ad9d81970b011570a376d7970b-800wi

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http://rhphotography.typepad.com/.a/6a010534ad9d81970b01156fae20ef970c-pi

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http://rhphotography.typepad.com/.a/6a010534ad9d81970b011570a37931970b-pi

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http://rhphotography.typepad.com/.a/6a010534ad9d81970b011570a37cc5970b-pi

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http://rhphotography.typepad.com/.a/6a010534ad9d81970b01156fae201e970c-pi

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http://rhphotography.typepad.com/.a/6a010534ad9d81970b01156fae218d970c-pi

[kencas]

You would have to be very happy with these!

Couple of quick C&C:

1. I like this one. You did get one with a bit of the dress detail?
2. Watch the shadow line across the groom's face.
3. Good. If you can maybe clone out / dodge the highlights in the top RH corner.
4. Lovely sequence. Although, the vignette in the third is a bit heavier than the other two.
5. This is my favourite! Nothing to comment for me...
6. Try and get the groom to smile a bit. Looks like he is about to bite your head off! Also, with the faces in the centre of the frame and the higher contrast, it makes the image feel a bit "awkward". Don't know how to explain it, but not my favourite.
7. Love that splash of colour. Second favourite...
8. Nice. Maybe next time try the same shot without the groom's right hand around the bride - looks a bit of a "ghost hand" when it is there. Also, crack a joke or something! Sheesh...

Thanks for posting.

Ken.

[xoldboy]

They are very nice, a job well done. the only thing i could comment on is your watermark, it is extremely large in some of the pictures and kind of distracting.