The New Guy

[Lordkwaz]

Hey guys this is kind of my first time posting on the board besides a comment or two. Finally got my flash off the camera with a little help of the sync cord so im working on my lighthing. Let me know how you like this
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3634/3561400219_566c30dfd6.jpg

[DerekSimon]

I like your idea, but the ackward pose and the distracting tilt of the camera isn't working for me. I do like the lighting but just work on other poses and maybe a different location.

[adnguyen714]

i agree the pose is a bit distracting and awkward.

[semi-fly]

For some reason my eye automatically goes to the pink glove/cast. Try having the model put her hand on the step or in some other position.

[Lordkwaz]

thanks for the advice ill post a different location in a few