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Highlight_Photography
26th of May 2009 (Tue), 21:10
Hi All,

Before completing my website 100% I would like some C&C.


Notes-

About & Services page have not been completed.

Website link is below

Thanks.
Highlight_Photography
29th of May 2009 (Fri), 22:56
Is it really that bad? :(
mattograph
29th of May 2009 (Fri), 23:01
No..... next time post it in Glamour and Nude, though:).

My thoughts.

First, suggestions. You need a MUCH better self portrait. This has a very "senior picture" feel to it -- not at all indicative of the "high end" photographer feel I think you want. Also, I'm on the fence about featuring it so prominently on your home page.


Actually, other than that. Its well organized, seems to move quickly, clean and easy to read.
Karl Johnston
29th of May 2009 (Fri), 23:07
Why post it in glamour and nude?

I think it's pretty good, just need to make it ...more informative, personal and interesting. As it stands now its pretty empty, but the layout is fast and smooth and concise and it works.

Definitely needs some meat and potatoes added to it, though.
mattograph
29th of May 2009 (Fri), 23:10
Why post it in glamour and nude?



Because EVERYTHING gets a comment in Glamour and Nude. ;)
Karl Johnston
29th of May 2009 (Fri), 23:11
Makes sense, but I'm pretty sure he's underage ! :p
mattograph
29th of May 2009 (Fri), 23:12
Makes sense, but I'm pretty sure he's underage ! :p

So am I, but don't tell my wife.......
Karl Johnston
29th of May 2009 (Fri), 23:13
You're under 18 and your married?! YIKES! I wouldn't go near that (actually I did straight out of highschool...but never again!) with a 10 foot pole until I'm 40.
mattograph
29th of May 2009 (Fri), 23:18
I'm sixteen, she's 15 -- but she thinks I'm 19. Only in KY. :)


note: This is a fabrication. Please don't send the social service black helicopters to my house........
Karl Johnston
29th of May 2009 (Fri), 23:30
I'd be more worried if the mods saw that than social services! :lol:

Or maybe not..for some reason I thought you had to be 18+ in that forum..
mattograph
29th of May 2009 (Fri), 23:33
... in dog years.......
James Robert Gratiot
29th of May 2009 (Fri), 23:52
Cameron:

I gotta agree with Mattograph. I'd lose the self-portrait entirely.
Highlight_Photography
30th of May 2009 (Sat), 00:45
Thanks for your comments,

Anything I should have replacing where the portrait is now?

Thanks again.
mattograph
30th of May 2009 (Sat), 00:48
Maybe a logo would work. Or another picture of you -- sort a low key, fine art b&w feel -- something that screams "master photographer!"
Karl Johnston
30th of May 2009 (Sat), 03:35
Another picture