A&E

[abbie]

My kiddos enjoying summertime. C&C appreciated as I am very much an amateur.:)


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http://www.thegreenwife.com/wp-content/uploads//2009/06/3.jpg


http://www.thegreenwife.com/wp-content/uploads//2009/06/1.jpg

[moeronn]

These are great captures. Nice lighting and exposure and pretty good use of depth of field - especially in the second. The first one is my favorite. The other two would be better if the kids weren't dead center in the image. Still, this is a great start. Keep shooting and posting.

[snyderman]

Yep, great exposures. Nice job.

dave

[DDA]

Good exposure and lighting. The slight critics I have are that
- as said, it would be better with the subject off-center
- you cut top of the head/some hairs in the first 2 shots

[neil_r]

Well exposed and great colour, No1 is really great pose and crop works well. No2 is a bit of a mugshot, a little too tight and dead centre, and the top of the head going out of the frame is not so good. No3 would be better if they were both looking the same way, the way it looks now it is as if they were both posing for two different cameras at the same time.

They are well exposed and great use of DOF in the first two.

[abbie]

Thanks, guys! Will keep all of that in mind! It's so freaking hard to get a decent shot of 2 kids who desperately hate getting pictures taken! I take what I can get at this point. :D

[monkeygirl]

They look good to me, other than I do agree with the other comments posted.