Da Weasel - 85mm f/1.8

[gonças]

First time using the canon 85mm f/1.8. Some shots are B&W because I didn't like the colour of the lights.

#1
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/2163/img8698.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

#2
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/7784/img8661.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

#3
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/4381/img9013.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

#4
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/5103/img8763.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

#5
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/5698/img9022.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

#6
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/9259/img8640.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

[alessandro2009]

I like the first and the fourth.

What do you think of this more natural version?

[gonças]

Thanks!

[Nouks]

Quality of the images is good, but I think the compositions could be more exciting. Most shots are a bit centered, and I don't really like the way you chopped off an arm (#6) and foot (#5). I also think #1 could easily have been cropped one tiny bit to get rid of the distracting really small piece of the light on the right side behind his head.

Two easy crop suggestions on #1: http://img.skitch.com/20090608-ram2b5bbba654i16dd7niskk7k.jpg
(Of which the red line would most probably be my choice)

[gonças]

hey nouks, thanks for your comment. the chopped arm and foot is due to the 85mm...maybe I was to close to the artists! lol