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idobref
11th of June 2009 (Thu), 02:14
Thanks to Anthony (DonJuanMair) for letting me use his equpment!

So I finally got my first rig shot, pretty exited about it :P

used couple of images to create the final version

C&C Please

Donor 1:
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff29/idobref/rsx/donor1.jpg

Donor 2:
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff29/idobref/rsx/donor2.jpg

Final Version:

http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff29/idobref/rsx/rolling1.jpg

muay_thai_dan
11th of June 2009 (Thu), 02:32
good job! but it looks weird how the wheels are tuned and the road seems to be straight

idobref
11th of June 2009 (Thu), 02:35
the is oversteering :P j/k

I dunno the motion blur on the road seems to be curved (on my monitor anyways)

Kyle is raaddd
11th of June 2009 (Thu), 02:36
WOW!
That's an awesome shot. Amazing for your first try as well. That DC5 is sexy also :)

aridan
11th of June 2009 (Thu), 07:31
Good job overall, but since you don't have any nearby objects in close proximity in the background (buildings, trees, etc.), it is very hard to convey motion. Other than the blurred wheels, the car appears to be almost static. I would try urban scenery instead of distant mountains.

Orlandoech
11th of June 2009 (Thu), 07:58
Your clone job out of the hood and where you tried to remove the pole in the paint is isnt good at all. Its pretty blatant where you've clone. I would work on fixing this.

There is also a halo over the car and mtns that should be fixed.

PhotosGuy
11th of June 2009 (Thu), 08:38
oversteering :P Oversteer can be fun! ;)

Good comments. It's a pretty good first try & I like what you've done with it!

DonJuanMair
11th of June 2009 (Thu), 09:41
i think for a first try its great.
Maybe add a little motion blur on the mountains?

Prototype
11th of June 2009 (Thu), 10:04
You are off to an awesome start!

keep it up! you setup looks better than my setup lol

NYNCTC
11th of June 2009 (Thu), 15:34
very nice! love those wheels haha

idobref
11th of June 2009 (Thu), 22:07
I kinda see what you mean by "lack of motion" ... I guess if there was more detail on the asphalt would have been more noticeable ...
I can work on the halo around the mountain a little bit also..

Thanks for the comments though ...

ProjektSol
12th of June 2009 (Fri), 00:32
dude nice job putting them together!
i do notice the hood job though

mikekelley
12th of June 2009 (Fri), 00:39
get closer!

idobref
12th of June 2009 (Fri), 02:02
i dunno guys ... i thought i did a great job on the hood...
i honestly think you are noticing it because you see the original ...

get closer ? - what do you mean

kay188
12th of June 2009 (Fri), 07:23
good job! but it looks weird how the wheels are tuned and the road seems to be straight
the is oversteering :P j/k
More like drifting. ;)

Orlandoech
12th of June 2009 (Fri), 07:51
i dunno guys ... i thought i did a great job on the hood...
i honestly think you are noticing it because you see the original ...

get closer ? - what do you mean

You are highly mistaken. The hood is horrible.