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echan
12th of June 2009 (Fri), 08:48
Hey Guys,
This is my first time post. Let me know what you think about this picture. Thanks! :D
gjl711
12th of June 2009 (Fri), 08:56
Welcome to the forum. Nice high key eyes.
tonydee
12th of June 2009 (Fri), 22:55
I'd prefer to see both eyes in focus... your lighting alone is sufficient removal / deemphasis of unwanted subject matter. A tiny smidge more nose might have made more the shadows there... I appreciate it's only meant to be a suggestion, but as is it just seems a little inadequate for counter-balancing the much larger, heavier eye regions.
Cheers, Tony
poppie guy
12th of June 2009 (Fri), 22:57
Welcome to the forum!
echan
13th of June 2009 (Sat), 08:22
Thanks guys for all the welcome.
Great suggestions tonydee, will remember that next time I shoot/edited.
Logan2010
13th of June 2009 (Sat), 14:21
love the shot and the look in the eyes.. i think the forehead is a bit too overexposed along with the right side..
RyanFok
14th of June 2009 (Sun), 13:42
Those eyes look familier...lol
TheHunter
14th of June 2009 (Sun), 19:14
I also agree that it would look better with both eyes in focus... and it looks a little overexposed everywhere. If you're PPing anyway, you could always overexpose it then, but you can't recover details lost at the time of taking it.
BigAlz1
14th of June 2009 (Sun), 22:52
I like it, Being a photographer I appreciate the DOF but others may not. I would for sure remove the new eye brow growth on the left eye. It is very distracting to me.
echan
17th of June 2009 (Wed), 13:40
I agree!
I never noticed the new eye brow growth till she told me herself (when the picture was posted) - oops.
Made the adjustments and have taken all suggestions into consideration. Going to try another shoot and see how that goes.
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