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Lahnet
15th of June 2009 (Mon), 12:03
The task was to make a natural outdoor picture of Simone. It is to be used in some kind of contest (not a photo contest)

Canon 5D
50mm / 1.8
Fill Flash

Please comment if you like. I have a opportunity to reshoot in a few days, but I kind of like these.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3393/3629529268_707a42c023.jpg
http://www.flickr.com/photos/lahnet/3629529268/sizes/l/

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2446/3628717983_28747d45f1.jpg
http://www.flickr.com/photos/lahnet/3628717983/sizes/l/

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3608/3629532044_819d8257be.jpg
http://www.flickr.com/photos/lahnet/3629532044/sizes/l/

clifgriffin
15th of June 2009 (Mon), 12:37
I like the first and last shots the most. The middle shot isn't as flattering.

On all shots the hair is a bit out of control (though that may be what you were going for)

Just my opinion...I'm in now way the last word :)

drdiesel1
15th of June 2009 (Mon), 12:41
I also like #1 and #3, but #3 looks a little chopped off on the right side. #1 is great.

I`m no expert, but just thought I would add my opinion too.;)

Lahnet
15th of June 2009 (Mon), 14:19
Thank you.

The hair chaos is intended :-)

My own fave is number 2

Sisyphus
15th of June 2009 (Mon), 16:18
#2 has the clearest shot of her face, unobstructed by hair. It's mostly a profile, though. I'm not too crazy about the flowers in the background, almost looks like they're growing out of her head. #1 is the most engaging, but has a sort of sheepdog look with all the hair in her face and eyes. #3 is not bad, but her expression seems a bit taut.

jetboy
16th of June 2009 (Tue), 03:03
I actually like #2 the most. #1 has too harsh of shadows due to the sunlight and #3 has hair obstructing her eye which is what I am drawn to the most. #2 does have a slight issue about the flowers, but, they seem to be oof enough to not be distracting to me. I really like how her hair frames her face in #2. Over all, sharp photos and good color. Great example of what a properly functioning 50mm 1.8 can do.