Junior Mr Hyde @ Play

[JamieAU]

Howdy folx,

Wondering what some of you think of this shot and how it could be improved upon. I have dropped a link for the original uncropped, sharpened & coloured version as well.

http://www.users.bigpond.net.au/jaffer/IMG_2299-mod.jpg

http://www.users.bigpond.net.au/jaffer/IMG_2299.jpg

Cheers,

Jamie

[Leighow]

Well I just looked at the top post.

Looks nice to me. Pretty typical of the bedroom PC setup with the blinds-of-all-kinds window treatment -- included the bent lovers that seem to go with the territory.

I might have tried to lighten the boy and his clothing. Presumably that would require some fill-in flash or a longer T.

The arm probably should not be sliced down the middle.

The PC screen might be turned towards us a bit.. it excites our curiousity. An illuminated mouse might add interest.

You son is obviously keen on getting this day's homework behind him! Just kidding!