Daughter on her play structure

[Passmeabrewski]

I took these Sunday afternoon. Good? Bad? Constructive Criticism appreciated.

[alessandro2009]

I like the most the first because i ask myself:
What are watching the child?

However i like also the second because there is a lot of naturalness in the pose and this is very difficult to achieve with the children.

[Kauaicrazed]

I think the conversion needs a contrast boost. They look a bit muddy to me.