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amd is the best
23rd of June 2009 (Tue), 22:21
This is my second strobe attempt. CC would be greatly appreciated.
http://www.pbase.com/amdisthebest/image/114212056large.jpg
http://www.pbase.com/amdisthebest/image/114212059large.jpg
Thanks,
Nick
Smitty2001
23rd of June 2009 (Tue), 22:46
I'm liking #1. I like how it shows the paints variations from light to dark. Also like the backdrop, fits well with the cars color i think.
There is one spot above the rear wheel that kept pulling at my attention from the flash though.
#2 - try to get rid of the flashes hot spots on the front bumper.
better than i can do though! Keep practicing, thanks for sharing.
RogerAylstock
23rd of June 2009 (Tue), 23:57
Nice Vette! (I have a Mag Red 2000 vert)
PhotosGuy
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 08:11
The strobes work well with that paint. I don't think you need all that foreground though.
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RadAL
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 09:57
i like it with the foreground.
amd is the best
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 10:03
Thank you both. I cropped it that size so I my friend could print it and have it framed in a standard size.
dizzye36m3
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 10:54
I think #1 is great. Like the background alot.
PhotosGuy
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 20:04
I cropped it that size so I my friend could print it and have it framed in a standard size. This is why they use mats adjust the proportions to the standard frames.
amd is the best
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 20:40
This is why they use mats adjust the proportions to the standard frames.
Hmm. Never heard of it. Care to elaborate?
cbouchez
25th of June 2009 (Thu), 00:06
+1^^
northpointphoto
25th of June 2009 (Thu), 00:41
Good job on the first one. The crop works good, it gives the photo depth. The color is great and really stands out against the background.
Looks to me like you had two strobes w/ umbrellas one at either end of the car pointed in towards the middle (although I might be incorrect). You have good exposure across the photo but the car looks a just a touch dark in the middle at the door. Its really not that bad it gives really good contrast but it creates some shadows from the side mirror.
1)Try moving the strobes a little closer together to give fill light in the middle of the car.
Or
2)Dial down the strobes a bit to darken up the ends to match the middle.
Doing either should give good fill across the whole car also get rid of the simi-harsh shadow caused by the side mirror (which really isnt that bad). Again really good job.
On the second shot good lighting although the color doesn't pop as much as it did in the first one. Try bumping up the contrast a little to bring out the color.
Two suggestions for the second
1) clone out the lights in the background they are kinda distracting.
2) watch the harsh reflections caused by the lights. Try moving them back, dial them down a touch and use a longer shutter speed on a tripod.
Again great job on both photos.
PhotosGuy
25th of June 2009 (Thu), 08:35
Hmm. Never heard of it. Care to elaborate? Basically, you crop the image to the best advantage to make the subject look good, & then fill in the difference in formats with acid-free cardboard. I blew this up to 12X18" & matted it into a 16X20" frame.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/PhotosGuy/Forum%20Junk/Frame_0479.jpg?t=1245936786
Most art/hobby stores have the materials. Michaels will cut mats, & there are lots of places online to supply them.
EdgarH828
25th of June 2009 (Thu), 17:29
cool PhotosGuy, that is a great idea. Thank you for sharing!
amd is the best
2nd of July 2009 (Thu), 03:08
Thanks for the info PhotosGuy!
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