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camaz55
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 02:04
C & C to your hearts content - looking for others input on composition and Post processing. This one was pretty much straight out of the camera other than a little sharpening.


See larger image in follow up post please

skygod44
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 02:07
What I can see, I love.

But can you post it a bit bigger?

camaz55
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 02:25
Sorry, here is a larger version.

http://i574.photobucket.com/albums/ss189/camaz55/StreetShotsParis3-2.jpg

dsat
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 04:01
i love the framing.. but Its a tad bit grainy.

skygod44
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 06:36
i love the framing.. but Its a tad bit grainy.

Second that ^^^^^^^^^^^^

Is it over-PP'd I wonder, because the tin looks sharp and clean.....

camaz55
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 06:39
I believe it's noise - shot at ISO 1250. I will go back and see if I can smooth this out.

Broncobear
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 06:46
A wider dof, I think it would be more interesting in a shot like this if more of it was in focus

camaz55
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 06:55
Have smoothed it out and toned down some of the noise in the background - -- Better ??

thanks


http://i574.photobucket.com/albums/ss189/camaz55/StreetShotsParis3-2-1.jpg

philmar
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 16:16
waaay too noisy, under exposed and white balance is off.

Nice composition and idea.

Flo
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 16:38
I am seeing alot of yellow, wasn't sure if that was done in editing or not?

skygod44
24th of June 2009 (Wed), 19:43
Hmmm, there is still a load of noise isn't there.....

But personally, I like the shallow DoF, so maybe this is the kind of shot that could really work if you convert it into something arty in PS or GIMP?