A go at urban landscape...not sure what i think

[mxracer535]

I took these yesterday and im not too sure what to think about them. I dont think i really have an "eye" for this type of shooting yet, but im working on it lol. Be as honest as you need to be

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3590/3676062379_bfcc9124e2.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2622/3676065737_db0c5ddfd7.jpg

[chopper5654]

honestly, neither "tells me a story." they just look like brick walls with stuff on/around them.

graffiti, people, trash, making it look like someone is arriving any minute or just left, etc. not that i'm any better. i dont have the "eye," either.

[aroundlsu]

Agree with above. It's a brick wall that looks like every brick wall. Why was it interesting to you? (honest question)

[Christopher Steven b]

i think the top one works--for me, certainly. With respect to the other one, I wish there were more empty space containing, surrounding the 'object' on the bottom right.

honestly, neither "tells me a story." they just look like brick walls with stuff on/around them.

graffiti, people, trash, making it look like someone is arriving any minute or just left, etc. not that i'm any better. i dont have the "eye," either.

sounds like a story to me and one worth exploring.