First Downtown Photoshoot, Looking for C&C

[patrobinson]

I've been on this site for a while now. This is my first post/thread. =)
This was my first downtown photoshoot. I went with another photographer friend and my girlfriend.
shots were taken with a Canon XT, kit lens, and a speedlite 430 exii (on some)

C&C is most welcome and appreciated!!

(Excuse the tacky signature, it's for another site)

Also, if this belongs in a different section, (people, etc) can a mod please move it?

1
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2673/3674437153_0e518e03a3.jpg
2
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2613/3674439263_9f2ebc4c34.jpg
3
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2489/3674441567_03c889576a.jpg
4
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2637/3675253296_8201acfaba.jpg
5
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3622/3674448387_076a9ed503.jpg

[patrobinson]

60 views and noone has anything to say?

[BigB778]

I like the first shot.. and the second..

[Ballen Photo]

60 views and noone has anything to say?
Unfortunately that happens some times.
I've been on this site for a while now. This is my first post/thread. =)
Glad You jumped in. :)

This was my first downtown photoshoot. I went with another photographer friend and my girlfriend.
shots were taken with a Canon XT, kit lens, and a speedlite 430 exii (on some)

C&C is most welcome and appreciated!!
Hi Pat, The first one looks like it might have benefited from a little more light reflected into her face.
The second and third ones appear to be lit better, but in all of these she seems a bit soft? Posting your EXIF might help.
All nits aside, I like the pose and smile in the first image better.
I also like the way number five turned out.
Are these meant to have an urban ghetto decay style going on? (The only reason I can think of for posing her in front of a dumpster)
Keep at it. ;)
-Bruce

(Excuse the tacky signature, it's for another site)
The signature looks fine to me.

Also, if this belongs in a different section, (people, etc) can a mod please move it? Looks OK where it's at due to the environment shot in. Could just as easily gone into People though. ;)
-Bruce

[patrobinson]

Thanks a lot for the comments.

[mickee311]

I really dig the one with the mask.

[patrobinson]

Thanks!
There were posted asbestos warnings, so the other shots were really quick while she took her mask off, then put it on right after. :-)