My first portrait photos

[titaniumsportz]

This is my first portrait photos so your honest and brutal C/C are greatly appreciated


http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll261/titaniumsportz/Abztract101_01.jpg

[alessandro2009]

Perhaps a little dark but the little model was a real big help for you.
I like especially the second shoot for the pose and expression so funny in a child.

Also kind the first shoot.

On the last perhaps a change on the expression and a less cut on the frame will be better.

[nightcat]

Ideas are good and the model is great, but why such dark images?

[EcoRick]

Nice but way too dark. The good news is that it's easy to correct. Once you get that dialed in, you'll get some great shots.

[anthonyi]

Agree too dark, not sure about the large black object in the right hand side shots either. Very cute expression in upper right shot especially though.

[saqib]

agreed with anthony - i had to squint at the screen to figure out the black thing...