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sonny_c
7th of July 2009 (Tue), 22:29
POTN meet Briana and Iliana. I am building a portrait portfolio and these sisters were my first official victims...err...subjects.
Don't hold back. Be honest and do not sugar coat it. I take constructive criticism well. Thanks.

1. & 2.
http://www.sonnycantuphotography.com/upload/faby/album1/images/GTP_5972.jpg http://www.sonnycantuphotography.com/upload/faby/album1/images/GTP_5980_Edit.jpg

3.
http://www.sonnycantuphotography.com/upload/faby/album1/images/GTP_5995_Edit.jpg

4.
http://www.sonnycantuphotography.com/upload/faby/album1/images/GTP_6019_2.jpg

5.
http://www.sonnycantuphotography.com/upload/faby/album1/images/GTP_6107_1.jpg

6.
http://www.sonnycantuphotography.com/upload/faby/album1/images/GTP_6143_Edit_1.jpg

7.
http://www.sonnycantuphotography.com/upload/faby/album1/images/GTP_6167_Edit_Edit.jpg

8.
http://www.sonnycantuphotography.com/upload/faby/album1/images/GTP_6220_Edit_1.jpg
NotYourPsycho
8th of July 2009 (Wed), 00:15
I love the whole set, but really enjoyed #2. Nice work
rmr21
8th of July 2009 (Wed), 00:43
Really great shots.......and adorable subjects!
anthonyi
8th of July 2009 (Wed), 04:20
Nice set, especially #1.
Lizzy7
8th of July 2009 (Wed), 04:34
I think they're all really fab......lovely shots. I really like number 2 as well.

The only thing I would do though is in number 3......it looks like a person in the background? It's just a wee bit distracting.

Cute subjects :)

Lizzy
blondine
8th of July 2009 (Wed), 05:47
very nice series, love #5...what an expression!
joeyCes
8th of July 2009 (Wed), 21:11
Great work, I love the coloring you chose. Nicely done.
christyjo2
8th of July 2009 (Wed), 21:25
I really like #2. And the baby's expression in #5 is too cute!
chukdivad
9th of July 2009 (Thu), 14:32
The only thing I would do though is in number 3......it looks like a person in the background? It's just a wee bit distracting.

^+1
I also find the vignette a little too strong in #4 (IMO). Great set, I really like the different PP styles you used.
sonny_c
11th of July 2009 (Sat), 17:35
Thank you guys very much!

I learned so much just from one shoot. With that being said, I still have miles to go, but improving is something I look forward to doing.
royboy79
12th of July 2009 (Sun), 04:03
Great job!! Number 1 does it for me.
briarlow
12th of July 2009 (Sun), 06:13
2 and 5 are great! Good models there.
A_Gurl
12th of July 2009 (Sun), 14:20
Very cute series and very cute little girls!!