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NicholasP
8th of July 2009 (Wed), 15:20
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DwightMcCann
9th of July 2009 (Thu), 12:47
A little something off in each but overall a nice set.
NicholasP
9th of July 2009 (Thu), 21:54
Would you mind elaborating? I'd really like to know to improve.
DwightMcCann
9th of July 2009 (Thu), 22:14
#1 Mainly you clipped the bass, but also that speaker/monitor or whatever in the FG.
#2 The angle doesn't add anything ... it may even distract from the FG/BG separation which seems to be the point of the image.
#3 Bass sticking into the back of the sax player's neck.
#4 Mic obscures face.
#5 Guitar clipped and monitor in Fg.
#6 FG is pretty busy ... we all know good drummer shots are hard to get.
#7 Too much 'up the nose'.
#8 Head/face is totally centered with lots of dead space above, which totally deflates the energy.

Also, it would be nice if you numbered your images.