View Full Version : Val + Mark - Few pics from my first wedding
21st of July 2009 (Tue), 12:12
Just a few, please leave some feedback though. :)
21st of July 2009 (Tue), 12:28
1) Watch your angles. The lines on the floor are straight, the mantle on the fireplace is not. So you have a slanted line from the mantle going through their heads. This (mixed with the seat not being centered on the fireplace) tells me that you weren't perfectly square to the fireplace... a little straightening could help even it out in PS. As far as the pose, he doesn't look comfortable/relaxed. Instead of having them sit there and kiss, try to set a scene for them and get them to interact with each other more. And if you can capture the image just before they kiss, you'll get a much more intimate moment. For an example on catching the kiss just before it happens, I posted a few here: http://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=664555. On the plus side, the exposure looks good, and I like the processing. ;)
2) Not sure what you were trying to accomplish here... I see a floor with an in-focus spot... and the lines on the floor aren't straight... When I look at it, it makes me tilt my head. ;)
3) I like the composition. You lost a lot of highlights in the veil and dress. OCF would have really made this work well.
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