Abandoned

[GTogs]

We were in North Dakota last year around Thanksgiving. We were driving through the countryside trying to spot some deer. I saw this old abandoned country elevator and had to take a photo.

http://members.aol.com/foggie65/Abandoned.jpg

Comments and constructive criticism appreciated.

[rubberchickenguy]

Nice light. This one is begging to be cropped as portraitnot landscape.

[GTogs]

Rubberchickenguy,

Is this what you had in mind?

http://members.aol.com/foggie65/Abandoned-port.jpg

Is this better?

Let me know.

[T.O.]

not for me.

I like your first shot, specially the light. I would perhaps situate the building a but further left in the frame, that would permit to have a better view of the horizon and give a more "nostalgic" character to your image...

still, this are comments made from the comfortable position of the viewer, your photo is nice as it is...

thank you for sharing,
T.O.

[BobL]

Humm. . . I actually don't mind the power lines in this one. I'd probably have just cropped out aa little more of the LHS space. That rusting roof is crying out for a nice close up, maybe when the shadows a are little longer.

Otherwise real nice.
Cheers