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raduste
12th of May 2005 (Thu), 07:31
I had this gril for an hour. This is what came out.
If you have any sugesstions are more than welcome, because in a few days I'll repeat the session.

raduste
12th of May 2005 (Thu), 07:35
Another two.

Michaelmjc
12th of May 2005 (Thu), 07:45
Nice shots, I find that black frame to be a bit big though.

Andy_T
12th of May 2005 (Thu), 08:07
Nice shots, the second and the last are my favourites.

Remembering what I heard about distortion of facial images, it might be an idea to shoot her at a longer focal length, because her nose seems to be ... how shall I put it ... dominant :wink:

Best regards,
Andy

raduste
12th of May 2005 (Thu), 08:13
Thank you Andy...The tip is great, I'll remeber it.

sixshot
12th of May 2005 (Thu), 08:15
I like the first 2 the most. Such an intense look on her face in the first and a like the posture. Plus the colour of her clothes on the red background works well.

hollow
12th of May 2005 (Thu), 08:20
Radu, exactly like Andy said. Try to find her best angle. It seems to me that is in first picture. But I'm not sure.

Best regards.

raduste
13th of May 2005 (Fri), 14:14
How about this one?

serissolutions
13th of May 2005 (Fri), 14:18
I think the backgrounds look vary bad. Why dont you use the background in the shot?

Ballen Photo
13th of May 2005 (Fri), 14:36
Hello Raduste, Welcome to the forum. :D
Your shots look pretty good thus far, and leaving aside any technical critique, ie; background, lighting, etc for the moment. The FIRST thing I will have to ask is, where is Her smile? I'm sure She's got a nice one, but let us see those pearly whites. ;)
-Bruce

elbirth
13th of May 2005 (Fri), 22:26
the main thing that stands out to me in the ones with the red and green backgrounds is it looks way too processed. It looks like rather than having her stand in front of a solid background, you simple cut and paste her into one. The lines around her hair especially are very telling signs of that. Also, the fading as you go down to her legs seems too unnatural.

Other than that, the photos are very nice, they're not too soft, but also not too sharp. I agree that her nose is quite dominant, but it seems to fit her, so I think it's ok, personally.

exposingmyself
13th of May 2005 (Fri), 22:52
i like no.'s 1 and 4 especially because of the natural background.

i don't have a problem with any of her features-makes her unconventional and very original.

raduste
14th of May 2005 (Sat), 00:28
OK. Thanks for your comments. I'll remeber next time.

tim
14th of May 2005 (Sat), 01:54
Did you photoshop her onto those red and green backgrounds? It looks fake to me. The third image appears to be slightly out of focus. I'd probably shoot from the side without the noise stud, just because I don't like it. I'd try and get more body shots, and emphasize her curves, she looks quite pretty. The hair in the 2nd shot looks funny to me, funny strange.